Posted in My books, artworks and stuffs

SBPnB Patreon November 2019 critique by Troy David Loy

Sharmishtha Basu’s Pen n Brush November 2019 Critique by Troy David Loy

Love almost lost Dibyo falls for Supti, and the more this dawns on him, the more he struggles to cope with the stress of suppressing it as his health declines. When Supti tires of her treatment at Dibyo’s office, she opts to leave, to escape Dibyo’s toxic parents. But Dibyo has a plan, and not one his parents would prefer, to save his love for Supti.

Love confessed A young man declares his love for the girl of his dreams, a declaration that turns out well, as she feels likewise for him. This one ends well.

Love is in the air Shuchi, Joy, and Tinni are friends, and Tinni notices that one loves the other. Will she succeed as matchmaker between them? An enjoyable short story.

Love net How to entrap strong people? A defense minister describes his plan to entrap them with love and lust through handpicked seducers and seductresses. What thoughts does this idea lead to in the prime minister? I’d say suspicious ones!

Magic Reva has a problem involving toxic siblings who exploit her at every turn. What does she do to escape this, to stand on her own, to actualize herself as a fulfilled person? Seeking work at a local orphanage, she draws her plans for a better life.

Love twists Maitreyee spurns Amal, for his uncultured behavior in public, and when he marries another instead, befriends his bride. The two friends discuss love, friendship and their meaning when Maitreyee herself marries.

Manager Mr. Dwivedi is in a business fix, and plots to change that by arrangement with one Mr. Jain. What scheme hatches between the two of them, with strings attached? Dwivedi’s “niece” looks like the solution to his problems!

Mandukraj Two women converse on the intrusive and venomous Vinod, “King of the Frogs” after he attempts a campaign of vindictive behavior. If there be a thing such as Karma, might “Mandukraj” actually have become a frog? The one gawking at the two while they speak might have something to say on that, could it speak!

Tiasa An accident leaves Chaiti disabled, and bitter, but young Tiasa can help, and help she does, making Chaiti much better for it despite her scarred persona!

Girlfriend slayer Debendra is disabled, with a twisted leg, with his mother extremely protective of him, and even in manhood is shy and lonely. What happens when he meets the lovely Mira? Will love blossom, or will it die before it can truly get started?

Miss Bittermouth Seema is intensely disliked at her work office for verbal bullying, and the four young women she tormented give her a parting gift after they arrange to leave the office for another with friendlier staff. What will this gift be? Very amusing, this one!

Meaning of life Mohini is in her forties and yet unmarried, so how does she create meaning in her life despite her circumstances? This one was heartwarming.


A bookworm transformed into an addicted writer. I love to write and illustrate them myself. By love I mean love, no half-hearted relationship, a full-fledged, passionate love, I can’t pass two days in a stretch without writing/painting (cyber), just feel empty like lovers do when their lovers are away on a tour! Even though I am thoroughly enjoying self-publishing with amazon, but if you like my work and want to publish my works in your magazine, books or better if you want to publish a book of my works please make me very happy by contacting me. Or if you want to sell my works on commission basis only!! contact me, I will be quite relieved. Honestly writing and selling your own work is a very BORING combination. So you are more than welcome! Mail me, or go to- my blog (I have 16 blogs in wordpress, all active, some on daily basis, every one on weekly basis screaming and vowing my LOVE for writing and painting- this one is first-born, so special) (You will get the link to my remaining blogs there) or you can check out my ezines- monthly- And if you want fb you can go to my page, linkedin- my email id and I am in goodreads and completelynovel too I guess I said enough about myself, right? You will forget if I stuff too much here, so if you are curious to know this humble creature just join me in my blogs :)

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s