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Agnishatdal Bhadra 1428 August 2021 critique by SB

Agnishatdal Bhadra 1428 August 2021
Critique by SB

Agnishatdal Bhadra 1428 August 2021

By your good old editor! Few simple words about the works of my much cherished authors! So the critiques will be honest, short and sweet.

Shunyata by Labanya: Sad and almost heart breaking.

Ye reap…3 by saptarchi: Saptarchi is right again. Covid might have become an eye opener for Indians, but they love to keep their eyes shut tight! They are incurable! It is strange that after so many years of lie and deception they still fall for honey-tongued serpents.

Fogline by Brieuc Martin Onraet 17: Another piece filled with Brian’s fantastic humour! Weather department is same everywhere it seems!

A mix up by Vasu Srinivasan translated by Raghunathan Kuppuswamy: Loved it, I was not sure where it was going, the end was hilarious!

Cometh the Magnus by Troy David Loy: Fantastic piece!

You already are… by Dom Collucci: Very true words, if you think deeply!

Bitter Pill dose 45 by We are safe 2: BP is right again, if you read newspapers and other things where people either express their opinion or share things claiming that they are true, absolute truth, you will realize how one too many of them have Cyclops vision.

Gillu by Manju Balkrishna: Just love the writing style of Manju, there is so much warmth and beauty in this story.

Dream Angel by Pat Ritters 1: Looks like the narrator possessed gambling luck, but it is a very bad obsession, one should steer clear of it!

I believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more works there!


A bookworm transformed into an addicted writer. I love to write and illustrate them myself. By love I mean love, no half-hearted relationship, a full-fledged, passionate love, I can’t pass two days in a stretch without writing/painting (cyber), just feel empty like lovers do when their lovers are away on a tour! Even though I am thoroughly enjoying self-publishing with amazon, but if you like my work and want to publish my works in your magazine, books or better if you want to publish a book of my works please make me very happy by contacting me. Or if you want to sell my works on commission basis only!! contact me, I will be quite relieved. Honestly writing and selling your own work is a very BORING combination. So you are more than welcome! Mail me, or go to- my blog (I have 16 blogs in wordpress, all active, some on daily basis, every one on weekly basis screaming and vowing my LOVE for writing and painting- this one is first-born, so special) (You will get the link to my remaining blogs there) or you can check out my ezines- monthly- And if you want fb you can go to my page, linkedin- my email id and I am in goodreads and completelynovel too I guess I said enough about myself, right? You will forget if I stuff too much here, so if you are curious to know this humble creature just join me in my blogs :)

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