Agnishatdal Bhadra 1428 August 2021
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Critique by SB
Agnishatdal Bhadra 1428 August 2021
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By your good old editor! Few simple words about the works of my much cherished authors! So the critiques will be honest, short and sweet.
Shunyata by Labanya: Sad and almost heart breaking.
Ye reap…3 by saptarchi: Saptarchi is right again. Covid might have become an eye opener for Indians, but they love to keep their eyes shut tight! They are incurable! It is strange that after so many years of lie and deception they still fall for honey-tongued serpents.
Fogline by Brieuc Martin Onraet 17: Another piece filled with Brian’s fantastic humour! Weather department is same everywhere it seems!
A mix up by Vasu Srinivasan translated by Raghunathan Kuppuswamy: Loved it, I was not sure where it was going, the end was hilarious!
Cometh the Magnus by Troy David Loy: Fantastic piece!
You already are… by Dom Collucci: Very true words, if you think deeply!
Bitter Pill dose 45 by We are safe 2: BP is right again, if you read newspapers and other things where people either express their opinion or share things claiming that they are true, absolute truth, you will realize how one too many of them have Cyclops vision.
Gillu by Manju Balkrishna: Just love the writing style of Manju, there is so much warmth and beauty in this story.
Dream Angel by Pat Ritters 1: Looks like the narrator possessed gambling luck, but it is a very bad obsession, one should steer clear of it!
I believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more works there!
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