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Agnishatdal Poush 1427, December 2020 critique by Labanya

Agnishatdal Poush 1427 December 2020
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Critique by Labanya

Agnishatdal Poush 1427, December 2020

Hi friends, let us begin!

Poush issue begins with tribute to Ramanuja, I have only heard his name, now I know a bit about him.

Of drum-rolls and Indians by saptarchi: Harsh, sincere truths.

Fogline by Brieuc Martin Onraet 8: Another hilarious piece of an angel explaining human body as a lab rat’s features!

A secret revealed by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: Well, with sons like them he should feel blessed not angry!

Gods of Terra by Troy David Loy: Background story on Gods of Terra, quite an interesting piece.

Heaven takes a trip… by Dom Collucci: beautiful poetry by a truly gifted poet.

Bitter Pill dose 38 by Bitter Pill: Secular India 5: Valid points again, Hindus should stop being thugs and Indian politicians should start treating them like equals with followers of other religions, neither superior nor inferior.

Energy by Brendan: Beautiful piece, a piece about a soul looking for soulmate.

The Tilbaroo station by Pat Ritters 5: Another cute installment of the life of newlyweds.


Lovely greeting Sharmishtha!

5 lovely shots- these too are from Agni’s November photography loved them all.

This month Linkedin Requests shares few more requests worth checking out [by authors].

The proposition by Pat Ritter: Sounds like new type of story.

Pikatron by Troy David Loy sounds like a great reading material with fractals as added beauty!

SBs’ book in amazon, The bridge of her dreams- sounds like an interesting read.

Star of the Month Kanan devi- She is another legend of old times, will check out her videos in YouTube. Have heard one or two already!

Star of West Whoopy Goldberg: Just love this actress.

Star of east Nanda- She was a priceless gem. So beautiful, sweet and elegant!

Youtubia-Vinod Dua- He is great!

Minutes Together: interesting story from mythology.

Loved the Bengali poem and the hindi poem both. Thank you for adding my work sheeter rod in your ezine Agni.

Kuvera- It was a cute story about a man getting jealous of Goddess Durga.

TnW- good suggestion!

Scaredy Stick- Good question!

The sketches all through the ezine were pretty, very colourful and lovely.

That is it I guess! See you again next month, and thank you Agni/Sharmishtha for translating my works!

Yours sincerely,


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